T1 Writing

We are learning to...

·      write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced

Criteria:

·      have an opening statement that tells who, what and where

·      write the events in the order they happened

.    have a conclusion or personal response

Football

We played football and my team won two times. We played Ice and River. You are not allowed to go out of the cones. It was fun and after that we played football. I was in the red and yellow and I won both times and I like it.

Teacher comment:

You have written some good sentences Jex.

Next Step:

Try to add some more details. You could have written what you did to play Ice and River.